ChadsWeb's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Heinous Anus Zone]

Heh

The animation, as always, was great. I didn't really understand the whole part with Mr. T, and I really wanted to see a bit of an animated example of the levels or at least a short clip of them or something.

Just work a little on your timing, I guess.

Bobert-Rob responds:

Well, that's kind of what the intro animation was. It only shows footage of the first idea Rob comes up with, but all the same. And Mr. T only showed up because of what Johny says, it's explained in the scrapbook. Abstract in any case. Thanks for watching.

[Flash-1]

A bit slow

This was really good for your first flash, and by first flash I'm guessing you meant the first real thing after awhile of practice, right?

Well, I think you should tone the FPS up a few so it runs faster, and then make it a little longer, and in the end you just need the special things like blood and sounds, and whala.

Zeth29 responds:

haha, well, to tell you the truth, it's my first....never mind, you're right, i have had a little practice in my computer class. i'll speed it up then, thanks

[Appleville Ep 1]

A good idea

I remember seeing this on the ABS forums, and I'm glad that you added to it, but the one thing that bothered me throughout this animation was the guy that wasn't a pineapple, because you seemed to be constantly changing him and just messing with him, It's fine that you occasionally give him some kind offacial feature, but really, you overdid it. It looked to me like you got a lot of inspirqation from Lazyboy. Just try to get all the touch ups done and improve your animation and keep the characters the same for most of it (Like at the milk store, the pineapple guy didnt have the sneakers he had in the begginning) and one last note, Make sure you fill in colors for things, like the guys hands at the milk store were just outlines sometimes.

FrozenSheep responds:

Yeah, the red guy is suppose to be constantly changing. As pointed out in the first scene where he walks out the door.

The rest are just mistakes.
:D

[Teh dot]

Good for a 4 yeard old.

But bad for Newgrounds. Sorry, but the begginning was the best part, with all that stuff where it split into 2 and such, that looked cool, but only because of the little dots that you surrounded it with when they split. The rest was boring, and just as a little advice, you should have used the fill tool white to make it so the replay button was easier to click. And a little more advice, when you're drawing a spiral or something but you want only little parts to appear at a time, then try to connect the ends with the starts of he next segment.

Matt2k8 responds:

thank you, my brother is jumping for reply and is really happy of all these reveiws! thanks so much

[Lucas cant brawl]

Boring

It was pretty good animation, nice art, but that's only half the war.

It was boring for me, I didn't really get entertained for long. I was actually about to close it but I twitched and accidentally made the window smaller, and almost closed it for sure but then the screen went over to Snake, which was nice to watch him dance like a moron :3

Horsenwelles responds:

the art and animation was the war. the only funny part was the end.

it wasnt meant to be funny, but more of a reference.

DONT TASE ME BRO!

[Olympus Burger Trailer V1]

Great

The beggining text could have gone by a little slower, and the quality of this video actually was really bad, it was kind of blurry, but it was great otherwise.

With a little work, it would look like a real show.

Sound-O-Vision responds:

Thanks for the tips. I felt the intro could be a little slower too. The video is double-converted, Flash --> video, video --> flash, so it hurt the quality a bit. I'll do what I can to clean it up.

[the cliff collab]

Pretty good

It wasn't too smooth, but it was actually really entertaining to me... which I don't quite know why, but I loved how you 2 of the authors were switching off at the end, killing eachothers characters and such. Okay animation, very entertaining.

ScrewedComedy responds:

thanx

[MC sprite project preview]

Just one problem...

You can click the frame with a single symbol on it and press F5 to extend that frame so he isn't shaking. Just work on your animation and get some sounds in htere, and you'll be fine :D

magecritic responds:

i know about that, but his stance is a 3 frame process which I made into a movie clip which is why he moves all over the place (I wasnt very accurate)