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[LL - Eraser's short 4]

Awesome

Great artwork, and a laughed a little when he said "Tuesday" :3

Great job maaaannnn

EraserLock responds:

heh. Thanks :)

[Gemini Mishaps]

Ehh

It was... boring. Not much happened, no real movement other than random sprites being put in for Megaman while he talked, and it just seemed to be 3 scenes, laid out liek this:

Scene 1: Have Megaman walk to the area
Scene 2: Have Dr. Wily shout about a plug or something
Scene 3: Small talk between Protoman and Megaman.

Not exactly a great script, you go there. Try to work on that.

Oh, and you aren't fooling anyone by trying to copy Bobert-Rob.

Robert-Bob responds:

Actually, I was so good at fooling everyone, I even fooled myself.

And yeah, that's the script. It's super dated, but I love it. I mainly loved the coffee bit, so I wanted to finish it and throw it out there. Glad you liked it!

[Pokemanze]

Awesome

You had some great ideas in there. The whole time, I was thinking "This reminds me of Unforgotten Realms," the new one, not the ones on NG. It seems like the movements in that series and this are very alike. It was entertaining, still. I would have given you a 10, but I know that it can't be completely difficult to animate with that program you and Schmoopy (UR's Creator) use because he's pumping stuff out weekly.

Sorry if that sounded like a plug or something, it's just that you're a lot like him. Good job, nonetheless.

Stalagmite responds:

ihavent heard of it lol. but i use a common technique called tweening. i think lol.
lots of squash and stretch. other people.. professionals propably do pump them out in a week. but this tok me longer than that because i wanted my first animation to be worthy of watching. i am extremely greatful for the nine! infact i think their are few worthy of a ten lol. everything can be improved. i am glad you enjoyed it. thanks for the review :D:D:D

[LL - Brucellosis]

Hey Sunshine ;3

Good job, try to make them bound or something instead of just sliding next time, though.

uglyslug responds:

They were kinda bouncing.

[This Is Spartaargh!]

Almost a Complete Copy

This is pretty much exactly like Edd's animation, except for the 5 or so frames that you may have added in of mentos or whatever. It's unorigional, try to draw your own characters and do your own stuff.

PhillipW00T responds:

once again, i sayd tht this was an animating practice...

[I'm a Creep]

To be honest...

It wasn't really as good as I'd expected it to be from the score. The graphics were pretty bad, mostly just a bunch of gradients on shapes. The majority of actual movement in this was some trees moving around, and every other bit of animation was just plain and bad, no FBF at all, just tweens. And when you have only tweens, you need to learn how to use easing a little, like the feather in the beginning, it looks horribly unnatural. ALso, one last note. The song was horrible, I like the origional version, and this just butchered that one, the song was just bad.

I do give you props, though, for finishing the whole song.

Ticketyt0ck responds:

There's some FBF in there, but duly noted. Easing that feather wasn't EASY....plus I didn't finish the whole song, goes on for another minute or so.

[Gelatinous]

Awesome

Who did that voice? :3

Awesome syncing up with everything, great storyline, I love how you drew Snake, too :3

Calicard responds:

It's in my dA journal.

thanks

[Waldo]

Good FBF

The animation you had in ther was good, but the idea was actually taken from Cyanide and Happiness.

But anyways, the voices were really plain, the animation could have been a little better, and it definiatly could've been longer.

pawlakt responds:

Cyanide and Happiness... that's it! thanks for telling me! I couldn't think of the comic strip... I'm going to go add it to the author's notes

[Shapes!!!]

Awesome

I loved the faces they had when the triangle started dancing.

Calicard responds:

thanks!

[How Darnell Saved Kwanzaa]

Good...

But it was almost completely shots of 2 almost the same frames, but with one having hte mouth of a character open. It was your basic DBZ ripoff. It seems you tried to win us over with the graphics and story, but if you really think of it, animation is about movement, then plot and graphics, and there wasn't much movement.
Plotwise- It's just like any other story where a mysterious, invinsible strong guy comes to a place to kill the last of a group of whatevers, and that last person just happens to be pretty strong but ends up dying because of how strong the mysterious chracter is.
Graphicswise- Great graphics, but really, was it worth it to not be able to do more action sequences that weren't just a bunch of hitting noises and 2 changing frames?

Good job, but do something less graphic intensive, and don't rip off DBZ that much, it's really unorigional.

Gonzossm responds:

I intended this flash to be longer so i didnt feel like making lip syncing for it because that takes to long. So yeah just 2 frames for the talking, I wanted to do more action seqeunces but ya know the deadline. I slaved myself to get this done >.> i guess the story was cliche but eh :). lol what can i say im a huge dbz fan. That franchise is the only reason why im a good drawer. :D