Amazing FBF
I honestly wasn't expecting that.
Since you're obviously from Deviantart, I'll tell you why I voted down...
People on Newgrounds care about 3 things...
Length, Comedy, and animation quality.
You've got the last 2, but length is something you'll need. Unless it's a hilarious short that leaves you laughing about it just from thinking about it, you'll need to lengthen this (Maybe add a plot, that's always good) or do a bunch of animations and mix them together Robot CHicken Style (Like what I did with my most recent animation)
Glad I could help, and I send the best of luck!