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Hey Sunshine ;3

Good job, try to make them bound or something instead of just sliding next time, though.

uglyslug responds:

They were kinda bouncing.

Almost a Complete Copy

This is pretty much exactly like Edd's animation, except for the 5 or so frames that you may have added in of mentos or whatever. It's unorigional, try to draw your own characters and do your own stuff.

PhillipW00T responds:

once again, i sayd tht this was an animating practice...

To be honest...

It wasn't really as good as I'd expected it to be from the score. The graphics were pretty bad, mostly just a bunch of gradients on shapes. The majority of actual movement in this was some trees moving around, and every other bit of animation was just plain and bad, no FBF at all, just tweens. And when you have only tweens, you need to learn how to use easing a little, like the feather in the beginning, it looks horribly unnatural. ALso, one last note. The song was horrible, I like the origional version, and this just butchered that one, the song was just bad.

I do give you props, though, for finishing the whole song.

Ticketyt0ck responds:

There's some FBF in there, but duly noted. Easing that feather wasn't EASY....plus I didn't finish the whole song, goes on for another minute or so.

Awesome

Who did that voice? :3

Awesome syncing up with everything, great storyline, I love how you drew Snake, too :3

Calicard responds:

It's in my dA journal.

thanks

Good FBF

The animation you had in ther was good, but the idea was actually taken from Cyanide and Happiness.

But anyways, the voices were really plain, the animation could have been a little better, and it definiatly could've been longer.

pawlakt responds:

Cyanide and Happiness... that's it! thanks for telling me! I couldn't think of the comic strip... I'm going to go add it to the author's notes

Awesome

I loved the faces they had when the triangle started dancing.

Calicard responds:

thanks!

Good Idea

I can imagine this becoming one of those videos that makes people just want to smile, if it was longer, with maybe in the beginning, a bunch of colorless sketches going by, and then this guy has this canon that makes stuff all colored and it makes people happy or something.

Good, but if you want to know how tweening morks, you can PM me.

Good...

But it was almost completely shots of 2 almost the same frames, but with one having hte mouth of a character open. It was your basic DBZ ripoff. It seems you tried to win us over with the graphics and story, but if you really think of it, animation is about movement, then plot and graphics, and there wasn't much movement.
Plotwise- It's just like any other story where a mysterious, invinsible strong guy comes to a place to kill the last of a group of whatevers, and that last person just happens to be pretty strong but ends up dying because of how strong the mysterious chracter is.
Graphicswise- Great graphics, but really, was it worth it to not be able to do more action sequences that weren't just a bunch of hitting noises and 2 changing frames?

Good job, but do something less graphic intensive, and don't rip off DBZ that much, it's really unorigional.

Gonzossm responds:

I intended this flash to be longer so i didnt feel like making lip syncing for it because that takes to long. So yeah just 2 frames for the talking, I wanted to do more action seqeunces but ya know the deadline. I slaved myself to get this done >.> i guess the story was cliche but eh :). lol what can i say im a huge dbz fan. That franchise is the only reason why im a good drawer. :D

Good Try

I like the sketchy style, but it's definiatly not at 200 FPS, probably 12.

It was good, but hardly.

Huggythekillerbear responds:

srry ment frames

Amazing FBF

I honestly wasn't expecting that.
Since you're obviously from Deviantart, I'll tell you why I voted down...
People on Newgrounds care about 3 things...
Length, Comedy, and animation quality.
You've got the last 2, but length is something you'll need. Unless it's a hilarious short that leaves you laughing about it just from thinking about it, you'll need to lengthen this (Maybe add a plot, that's always good) or do a bunch of animations and mix them together Robot CHicken Style (Like what I did with my most recent animation)

Glad I could help, and I send the best of luck!

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