Score: 10

"Great Job Origami"

submission: OrigamiLock is an asshole

date: October 26, 2009

Great FBF, and I love the cat getting shot :3

Score: 10

"This made me feel the power"

submission: LL - Captain Coffee

date: October 26, 2009

Great job, good sir.

Score: 10

"Great Job"

submission: The Toad Lock Show 07

date: October 25, 2009

Loved it, just as good as your others, if not better. Keep em' coming

Score: 10

"Great Job"

submission: Schmooper-Schmeroes

date: September 29, 2009

As always, you manage to impress greatly with smooth animation and a nice cartoony style.

Though I did notice that when you had the fish jump out the window, it looked like you had to just stop drawing once you got to the edge of the window, and there are 2 ways off the top of my head that can fix that and make it better.

Firstly, you could use 3 layers, the top being your fish guy, the middle being the wall he's jumping behind, and 3rd being the layer he moves to for the last of the frames, then just animate him up until he would be crossing over behind the hole, or just animate seperate parts of him on the right layer. Then you just have all the foreground and background stuff and it should work fine.

Or you could do the easier way which I think doesn't give you as much of a sense of accomplishement (And may not be possible if you use movieclips on wiggling backgrouns that aren't just blinking a little) All you'd need for this way is to unlock only the layers which have the character parts, and then turn on "Edit Multiple Frames" and erase the part along the line of the window rim.

But yeah, good job :3

Score: 10

"Not sure how this passed without being green D:"

submission: LL - Thank you Jujube

date: July 15, 2009

Great job, MAGICKA, this was well done as always and the lipsync was bouncy and nice, which was strange for such a serious aniamtion. So good job on the art, animation, and all that.

Although I have one critique: The coughing from Banana seemed to come out of nowhere and really shouldn't have been a real cough, or at least it should've been timed better.

Score: 10

"Not bad"

submission: Found flash

date: July 2, 2009

It was very good for a first flash. I liekd the metallic theme you gave it, though I still feel the need to give you some critiques:

Music was great for what it was, but I watched it twice and still didn't really understand it. It struck me as the type of thing you'd see in some crazy satanic acid trip or something, if it had more color, at least. I'm glad to see you're doing FBF, as I always am, but constant FBF can be very tiring if you're going to do anything longer, and especially with a plot, although Theboogly definitely pulled it off. Just try to make background color transmissions smoother, in this case it could've been done with a simple shape tween, but you're at a good start. Try out a plot or doodle out some characters of your own, make a few comics of them for awhile until you've got some original characters who you can reference to their pasts without making stuff up on the spot, it really fleshes characters out if we know they have more to them than we know.

10 and 5 for effort and a great start :D

Score: 10

"Ahaha"

submission: LL - Prom

date: June 30, 2009

Who's that handsome fellow on the right? HE LOOKS SO...

FAMILIARRRR

Great job, though. With all the art and syncing with sound :3

Score: 10

"Oh man"

submission: TheLongStory Ep.001

date: June 18, 2009

I can't wait till we get to see some Wine and Master action.

Maybe I'll be lucky enough to make that part.

Score: 9

"Pretty Good"

submission: Pencilmation #5

date: June 11, 2009

I liked it, mostly. I'm not sure if that whole fart was supposed to be a childish laugh, or more like a "Fart on that ugly fat kid" kind of laugh, so I went with the latter option. It was well animated, and I liked it for the msot part, though I had to mark you down 1 point for two reasons:

"Pencilmation 3?" Why is it 3?
And the one character always would do that cheesy smile at the camera, which I thought was a little stupid looking.

By the way, are you Ross, or not? You're reffering to yourself, or him, as if you aren't him, which I'm surprised no one's investigated yet.

Score: 9

"Woooh"

submission: [LL] - Tourettes

date: May 28, 2009

Great job Wine, much better quality art than what I've seen of your other stuff.

(-1 poitn for being late though ;3)